Poem: Lakes of Darkness
Lakes of Darkness
by John Coyne (Ethiopia 1962-64)
He came here to this green shore
From loneliness of bachelor nights,
Empty Sundays,
A life of shattered hopes
Mirrored into tragedies.
From semesters of faculty treachery,
Misdemeanors in the hall,
Months of silly students,
Who tore wide his heart
With youthful gall.
A little man,
He wears his age with grace;
He brought to me
A spirit bent from
A course of use.
We slid the books aside;
Fished for trout off the point.
I caught a fighting rainbow
Who arched my pole when reeling in
The perimeter of its time.
In this cruel scene
He saw his own tangled metaphor.
Caught, he knew, in a shrinking scope
Where strong men fight artificial
Wars with words,
To die unnoticed as commas on a page.
A trout (free on the sunset of the water)
Flipped in space for flies,
Then slid again to darkness.
The slap of water brought
To mind our own fixed lives.
The world we build is
Ours to shape, more free
Than that slick fish,
Whose time is judged in elements.
Because of this,
We all have lakes of darkness,
Not to seek in refuge,
But to light with love.
Touching John,
Thank you.
Best,
G.
Thank you, John. It’s beautiful, made me cry.
Liz T.
Thank you, John. Well done.
Miriam Aiken
Nice poem, John. Bravo.
Good stuff, in the zone.
Spare and moving.
John,
I printed this moving poem to keep with a small collection of poetry so I can read it over and over again through the years.
Stunning poem. And stunning line, “To die unnoticed as commas on a page.”
Thank you.
I look forward to reading more!